Friday, September 28, 2012

My last Summer:



Hello my name is Marta and I'm now talking about my summer.
First I talk about Valencia, the second about Roses, and finally the return.

I went to Valencia with my parents by the end  of July, because my sister had broken her leg. In Valencia I went to my parent’s house for my mother. Because my grandfather had a house there. I stayed in Valencia for four weeks. I went there to see different things., as monuments, squares, parks, the City Hall and many other things.

Secondly I went to visit my friends in Roses. I stayed there for a week. There I went go to the beach. And also the last day I went to the water park. It was fun. So there I spent my birthday.

Finally I went  back home in August. Then I prepared to start school and finished the summer homework. But before starting school, I went to celebrate the birthday of my little cousin. In a few days, my sister left.

Observation of your oral presentation:

Presentation:

Did you use any resources? Yes, I'm use the power point
Were the resorces relevant and attractive? No much
Did you show/talk about the photos to the audience? Yes but I did not


Body language and eye contact:

Did you look at your most of the time? Yes, I did
Did you read from your notes? No much

Did you any gestures/movent to hold the attencion of your audience? No

Structure:

Did you organize your ideas in orŧher of importance? No, I didn't

Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? Yes I did
Which ones? First,second, finally...

Content:

Did you introduce interessting information to your audience? No, I didn't
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet/ books...? No, because is my holiday
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? Superficial

 Language:

Did you check your grammar? Ye, I did
Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking the dictionary?  No much
Did you sentances linkers? Yes, and, but...
Did your files?Yes, I did

Pronunciation & intoniation:

did you know how to pronunce all your words? Yes
Did you check the pronunciation witha dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No much
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone all time? No
Did you use fillers? Yes, I did

Self-avaluation:

You are your teacher! What mark did you get? ;-) 
I think 4,8 or 5

Classmates:

Laia: summer camp, CAVA, Santa Cristina.
Blanca: England, Peru, Pals.
Mireia F: L'Albera, Estartit, Banyoles.
Jordi: England, Hamburg, I prepared for school.
Bernat: Can Toni, England, Platja d'Aro.
Mònica: Bournemouth, stage in a camp, l'Escala.
Marta: Poole, Italy, Roma, Tossa
Núria: Poole, Platja d'Aro, Pamplona/Vitoria/Saragossa
Mireia N: England, Platja d'Aro, Banyoles, Mieres.
Pau: Playmouth, Platja d'Aro, football season.
Enric: Banyoles, Sitges, Eslovenia, Banyoles.
Elena: Poole, St Petersburgo
Carlota: Turquia, Cadaqués
Esther: Camping, l'Albera, Granada.


(The powerpoint and podcasting, I don't upload for problemes)

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